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 * Introduction Paagraph** ** I want the people of the United States to see how much were spending on war each-year and we shoudnt be spending so much. I am not opposed to all wars. I'm opposed to dumb wars. The United States has spent 1,101,209,981,697 DOLLARS since 2001. Can wars cause depression and stress for when they come home from war. I want the people to know that the money will be going to the troops fighting these wars so they can get supplies they need. ** ** THESIS STATEMENT: I want the people of the United States to see how much were spending on war each-year and we shoudnt be spending so much. ** ** HOOK: I am not opposed to all wars. I'm opposed to dumb wars.   ** **  Main Point 1: The United States has spent 1,101,209,981,697 DOLLARS since 2001.  ** **  Main Point 2: Can wars cause depression and stress for when they come home from war.  ** **  Main Point 3: I want the people to know that the money will be going to the troops fighting these wars so they can get supplies they need.  **
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 * The people of the United States should be able to only pay alittle money to the cost of war. ** ** Support Detail/Evidence 1: The money that people pay taxes with the government should take 20 percent out of it and put it tward the money on war. This would be a better way than the government paying so much money. The government pays to much money for sending troops, helicopters,ships,ammo,guns,jets,and guns. The United States is having a hard economic time at the moment. We should put the money to helping people have jobs and have people live in apartment buildings.  The United States government should pull all the United States Military  out of all the current wars we are in.  This would help save a lot of money and it would save many soldiers lives and keep the  soldiers healthy. The United States might not be in debt if they saved a lot more money.         ** **  Body 2  **
 * Wars can cause depression and stress for when you come home from war.Many soldiers that come home cant sleep or can function correctly. This has occurred to many soldiers. In reports it is proven that many soldiers are very forceful to there wives. When they hear something loud like a firecracker or thunder they dunk for cover thinking its a bomb going off. These things happen to the soldiers so they might hurt themselves or others. When they come home they shut down. They might think that everyone is against them and that they are trying to hunt them down to capture them or to kill them.This happens to many soldiers they think this and they get very freaked out.   ** **Edit this page (if you have permission) – Published by Google Docs – [|Report Abuse] – Updated automatically every 5 minutes**